First came spring, when he was nineteen
A long-distance affair, an unlikely pair
She was lively and fun, the party-hopper type,
He was more subdued, didn’t fancy too much hype
Yet they got close, through phone calls and net,
Didn’t make a difference, that they hardly met,
He would sing to her at times, late into the nights
It was the sweetest way, to resolve any fights
Light and breezy, the romance brewed,
Until one day, betrayal spewed.
She found someone else, someone closer to home,
And our hero was ditched, left brooding and alone,
But as they say, everything’s got reason,
For soon came along, another season.
Dazzling and bright, she was the summer sunshine
So sweet, so alluring, like the finest wine.
He was soon intoxicated, high on her love,
She was his angel, his beautiful dove.
Sultry and torrid, there passion was wet fire,
Neither had ever felt, such lustful desire.
So wonderful and warm, she lit up his life,
And he began to dream, of making her his wife.
But alas this too was a passing phase,
For in time their relation, began to haze
She slowly slipped away, like a setting sun,
And in her aftermath, he was bound to burn.
Till at last again, the season changed,
And he found respite, as winter gained.
She was hot and tempting, like a steamy mug of chocolate
And he cozied up to her, over the internet.
They Facebooked and Skyped, sharing tales of heartbreak,
And in so doing, baked their love cake.
She was his comfort and his peace,
Like a blanket of fleece.
He basked in her affection and snuggled up to her care
He’d been through so much, this was only fair
But one fine day, the chocolate cooled,
And our hero realized he was being fooled.
Her warmth proved superficial, as he caught a chill
And so he escaped, before winter could kill.
Anticipating spring once again,
He began to shed, his layers of pain,
But don’t you know, climate change is real now?
And so it rained, and it rained how!
She brought cheer and hope to his tormented heart,
And he prayed to be hers, to never grow apart.
Together they frolicked, reveling in each other,
Completely in sync, they were birds of a feather.
She showered him with praise, and drenched him in joy,
In her fascinating company, he was an innocent little boy
She replenished his soul, and enlightened his mind
He saw her as perfect, so precisely his kind.
But rains are intermittent, don’t you know?
Sooner or later, they’ve got to go.
So again our hero was left high and dry,
But he was so used to it, he didn’t even cry.
For by now he knew, the weather’s play,
Thus let time have its way.
Sure enough another summer slowly emerged,
Her freshness took over, and the past purged
She was unlike anyone he’d known before,
And now he was sure they’d have something more.
Despite differences and distance, they remained committed
She was the only girl so far, his love befitted.
Her soft husky voice, was melody to his ears,
And her pretty face, it rested all his fears.
She was a delicate red rose, whose thorns didn’t prick
To defend and protect her he was oh so quick.
It seemed like this season was finally one to stay,
And their love grew stronger, day by day…
Yet all this time, there’d been another girl too,
The one he didn’t notice, never mind woo,
She’d seen him through it all, all the seasons of his life,
But all she ever got was never-ending strife.
Why is so love so unfair, so incorrigibly mad?
Why is she destined to be eternally sad?
She makes it through the tears, hanging onto his mere presence
To all else she is oblivious, even to his irreverence
With difficulty, she’s accepted, they were never meant to be,
Yet she prays one day, her love he will see.




14 scribbles scribbled back to me:
All through the poem, I could think of just one movie-500 days of summer but as i read the last stanza, the story took a different turn.
I wish he had looked at her once,I wish he could see her love for him,I wish it would have been a little less painful for her, i wish life would have been a little more fair for both of them...
This is just.... WOW! Really!
Very well written. The guy may not face as much angst as he sees each weather wither away, along with his seasonal love affairs. But the girl, who silently played witness to her love having been with everyone else, must have had a real tough time.
This way so wow and so beautifully written...u floored me with ur expressions :)....sometimes life is just....no words to say....but u said beautifully :)
@ Jaspreet, yes, the idea came from that movie but i forgot to mention it in the post. :P
@ Sadhana, thanks :)
@ Meher, thanks and yes, indeed. :)
@ Scribbling Girl, thanks so much..:)
Even in there seasons.. Why a female has to suffer?
Why this true love is gone unrequited? Maybe the destiny play.. Great one. And yes i too was reminded of 500 days of summer at many points.. Sad and painful.
phir se subah hogi, kabhi to tere dar par,
phir se tere mann mein, hum rahein har pal....
All thorough the narration, I could muse this and even in the last one too.
Nice one.
:)
Blasphemous Aesthete
the season will change for the girl also...it should...may be she deserves a better one!!
hmmm...but love can not be helped!! u cant undo it once u r into it and the season of love is itself a beautiful season even wid all d pain it brings along..after all DIL TO PAGAL HAI,DIL DIWANA HAI !!
but practically yar one can't keep waiting the whole life...only if the hrt can permit u to move on!!!!!
awwwwwww!!! dats so not fair.
will dere be a happy ending to dis story although i know this is a hypothetical one but still thinking of the end how it would have been :P
Synonyms of the word AWESOME are as follows...
1. Amazing
2. Awe-inspiring
3. Mehak
Period!
PS : Thanks a ton for this amazing poem. You lit up my depressive day.
"All through the poem, I could think of just one movie-500 days of summer but as i read the last stanza, the story took a different turn."
The girl turned out to be such a bitch in that movie. By the way i find Zooey Deschanel totally adorable. She's also a pro singer, did u know? She's part of a two-piece band called SHE & HIM. Check her out on Youtube.com. Her husband is Ben Gibbard...lead vocalist of the band 'Death Cab for Cutie'.
Getting off your back now. tata!
Death Cab For Cutie : What Sarah Said
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I483tB12SyE
Hey, Hi
sorry for being late to comment...(actually cudn bring myself to read this long a post) but am glad i did...
beautiful gal...nicely expressed, thoughtful...seasons, nice...
off all his love, her love was the greatest. True the longing to be luvd existed, but it was the human part of her..se luvd like no one ever cud, for in her love, she had no expectations, it was pure...the best feeling anyone can ever have...its bliss!!
Regards,
The Silhouette...
The guy was so damn lucky!!!
I am jealous ;-)
@ Deepika, yes its sad but it could have been a guy in place of the girl too i suppose
@ Anshul, thanks for those lines
@ Megha, yes one can't keep waiting but in poems and stories and works of fiction, they sure can.. :) :)
@ Kazuma Yoshikuni, you are too kind. It's your comments that light up my depressive days. :) thanks so much! the band sounds good!
@ The Silhouette, thanks a lot.. :)
@ lumuhuku, lol... :P
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